I just lost like an entire fucking review before this because the site glitched, so cut me some slack.
The halo is nice, as well as the way it melts, and how the light fades away as it goes further down the melting material, creating the impression that it's fading from existence.
The video distortions and the small bits of flesh that are melting away on the face is nice, and gives it a creepy effect.
The X'd out eyes and "Stitchface" mouth go great together, along with the skin.
P.S expect to see some stupid-ass header above each of my reviews from this point on.
This reminds me of my girlfriend. Is that bad? I think that might be bad.
Anyway, The Beacon was kinda cool, so I'm back to be an even bigger asshole over a simple doodle that wasn't meant to be fucking criticized!
This time, there really isn't a lot of negativity to spread here. I have searched high and low, but I can't find anything really negative to say about this. The rims of the eyes curve according to the shape of the head, the body is perfect for that Madness figure look. The static turns pink and even beige in some spots, giving a nice dim light.
The black streaks across the static give a cracked look, the mouth is built into the jaw and the lining of it is perfect.
Despite my best efforts, I can't find anything negative to say about this.
Is it bad that I need to find something negative to say about this? I think that might be bad.
Overall, fucking... 5/5.
P.S. Fuck you for making a perfect picture that I can't bash in the slightest.
P.P.S. It's actually good, though.
Haha! Thank you for the great review, and thank you for giving me a good few chuckles, sir! I quite appreciate it.
There's so many things wrong with this.
I don't even need to explain it, this may sound unforgiving or "MEAN", but it really is bad.
And while being "bad" is a matter of opinion, when it's flawed greatly in every aspect, there's no point.
You shouldn't draw anything but pixel art using MS Paint, like, you really shouldn't. But, vague hate speech aside, I'll just finish this review so no more of my time is wasted here.
First, the comic doesn't fit the frame, and it's not even a perfect square or rectangle, and the panels don't even match size. Next, the grammar and punctuation is... Well, non-existent. The storyline goes nowhere from nowhere, there's no character, at all. And the cause of this is fucking stupid. "I'm bored, so therefore, rubbing a random guys back is clearly the best thing to entertain myself! Not watching clouds or ant mounds!"
Characters aren't even made using Line or Curve. No, let's draw it using Pencil. Pencil is clearly the best choice for symmetrical limbs on characters. Thus, the character design is shitty.
The grass slopes randomly in the same frame when it wouldn't have for any reason.
And, just, everything is wrong with this. Fucking everything. If you can't make it, practice before you go public. If you don't have the tools to make it, go to a fucking online art program. You don't even need a download.
Overall, solid 0/5. No support.
P.S, compare your comic with others here before you post.
first of all I HAD NO FUCKING IDEAS and this was my FIRST FUCKING TRY and Ms Paint? ITS THE ONLY SOFTWARE I FUCKING HAD! i hope people understand this good,
I looked at the title, I thought it was a fuckin' joke.
No, it's not a joke. Someone made this.
Whatever, besides the fact that every second I look at this is another year of therapy, this is pretty OK.
The detail put into the secretive murderer whose eyes are bulging, as well as the tree, aliens, and the planets exceeded my expectations. The buildings in the background look lazily placed, though, and just there to display the message that they display. They really only sit there and draw light from the sun.
I feel more work could've been put into the buildings, or at least more of them to make it not look so out of place. Though, I'll wrap this up in stop dwelling in one detail.
A few things are out of place, but that's not entirely important for the overall drawing style of this.
So, overall, 3.5/5.
Thanks for your comment man!
I really appreciate any feedback. :D
As I look at this, the first thing I notice is that it looks like mosaic tiles. But, as I stare more, I look at how the center piece hides behind the corner pieces, and how the pattern shifts around and away from the cylinders. I also notice how the decorations and trees shorten, lengthen, curve and otherwise deform according to their position and the decorations'.
Overall, the detail put into the spheres -- as well as the contrast between the background and the spheres -- creates a nice touch.
I'll give it a 4.5/5.
Thank you so much man it's things like this that really allow me to continue making my abstract pieces and allow my mind to wander.
I am unclear as to what I'm supposed to be feeling, looking at this.
I guess this is supposed to invoke a feeling of fear, but, man,
I ain't feelin' it.
Considering this could just be creepy doodles, or the artist here could actually have a mental problem, I'll look at it like a regular piece of art.
The first thing I notice is the two blotches over the creature's legs. What are those? Is this some new brand of kinko-porn I haven't seen?
Next thing here, is the static and the heavily blurred background. Now, normally, I wouldn't really get my collar in a knot over something like the background, but for the positioning of the creature and how close it appears to be, why the hell is the background heavily blurred?
And then the static. The static creates a feeling that the creature is dangerously close, which again, feels weird with that blurred background.
And, looking at the creature, it just seems really cliche. The whole wacky Slenderman tree limbs seems overused to me. The shadow person thing here isn't too overused, so I'll pass on that. But what really aggravates me is the unimaginative glowing red eyes.
Why? Why not just white eyes? What's up with cliche red eyes? Seriously, I don't know whether to be creeped out or just grip my hair in irrational frustration.
Overall, I'll just give it a solid 2.5/5.
E for "effort", though.
This little ol' creepy doodle I made was out of pure nonsense, and, didn't serve any real purpose. Like other pieces of my art, it's quite odd. I appreciate the review and criticism though, and I find it fair. ;)
Not bad, better than most of the unbearable shit I've seen here, and certainly better than what I make. There's not much to say about this, simply because the only things to look at are the astronaut and the landscape ahead of him, but, for the most part, it is good.
It's detailed, but not too incredibly detailed, which is nice. The blur gives it more of a mysterious tone.
I'm talking out of my ass, but whatever.
It's good. 4/5.
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